Blog so far.

So we have a new assignment and it's to assess our blogs so far...

My strongest post I think was my first one--grammatically at least. But, I feel like that one doesn't really reflect my blogging style. I like the conversational tone better, y'know? [see what I did there haha]

My weakest post I believe is my last one. It had a lot of typos since I used my phone to type it out during the Orchestra Concert. I know I've been lacking on this blog assignment, so to make it better I'm going to spend more time on it. :)

Writing in general: I think I really need to work on my run-on sentences. I know what they are but, I can't seem to stop writing them.

Things I'm going to add to my blog: I really need to explain penguin prostitution. All the questions I get are mainly about that topic. I'm also going to be adding more pictures and more facts about penguins. Maybe even an occasional update on the Hockey team the Pittsburgh Penguins [by the way, they just whooped the NY Islanders]


That's basically all my thoughts on my blog. It's certainly lacking, but I'll try to spend more time on it to build it up.